I was very pleased to get the comments from Zach and Raymond that I did. They complimented my writing by saying that it was passionate, effortless, and direct. They also said that they wanted more in my second post and more about zombies in general.
I think my writing could use a little more information. It is very direct, and some extra information would make the blog more playful, which is something I want, because zombies are fun. That's the main thing. I wanted to have more in my second post but I felt rushed. I want to bolster it tonight, but I feel as though I've disorganized my blog by not asking the question "What is a zombie?" prior to talking about 'the split'. So I should ask the question "What is a zombie?" and part of my explanation will be 'the split'.
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